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The gunman that shot her was from the Taliban. I think this detail should be added and why it happened. The third question wanted to know what YOU think Malala will do when she gets back to Pakistan. Sure, it is possible that she may be killed, but what will she do? I think she will keep on fighting for the right for girls to be educated.
Thanks for completing the assignment. I wanted you to answer each question in a full sentence. For example, for number one, you could write: The name of my painting is Checker.
You say the painting makes you happy. Could you explain why? This means I am looking for a few more details.
USE THE DATE FOR THE ENTRY: Tuesday, January 8, 2013
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NUMBER EACH ANSWER FOR EACH QUESTION:
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1.It look like that Malala is going home to Pakistan.
ReplyDelete2.She bus got stop by gunman that shot she in the head and neck.
3.I think she will be killed.
Thanks for answering the questions, Zachary.
ReplyDeleteUse Read and Write Gold to listen to your answers before submitting them for me to look at. This way you will get a sense of how they sound and how you might be able to improve them.
The gunman that shot her was from the Taliban. I think this detail should be added and why it happened.
The third question wanted to know what YOU think Malala will do when she gets back to Pakistan. Sure, it is possible that she may be killed, but what will she do? I think she will keep on fighting for the right for girls to be educated.
Thanks for completing the assignment. I wanted you to answer each question in a full sentence.
ReplyDeleteFor example, for number one, you could write: The name of my painting is Checker.
You say the painting makes you happy. Could you explain why? This means I am looking for a few more details.
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