Thanks for answering the questions. I would like to see you add some more details to your answers to make them stronger.
For example, she is going home, but where is she leaving? Based on the evidence in the picture, you could write something like: She is going home to her family after leaving the hospital.
Also, she was shot in the head and neck but by who? The last question could use part of the question in it to make it clearer: When she returns to Pakistan, she will fight for women's rights.
wed,jan 23/13 1.What is your painting called? 1.Wounderland 2.How is your painting an example of your happiness? 2.Its very colourfull&fantisy. 3.How will you use the image of the painting to remind you of being happy? 3.Ever time i look at my painting i think a happy though.
I like your very colourful piece called Wonderland. What is it about colour and fantasy that makes you happy? Adding a few more details would make your work a lot stronger and richer. I know you have some great ideas!
I am glad that you might take a look at this work and think some happy thoughts.
To make your writing clearer, I would take a listen to your writing in Read and Write Gold and make changes to your work. There are a few mistakes which you should correct ("though" should be spelled thought, "colourfull" and "fanitsy" should be spelled colourful and fantasy).
Good for you, Bishop. I am glad to see you get started on this.
It looks as though you have your Level 1 question: Who is Harriet Tubman? I would think of adding some more details about where the slaves were rescued from and where they were brought to. Maybe you can answer those questions as you moved into your Level 2-4 questions.
You have a series of questions, but I want to remind you to make sure you use the questioning rubric to set up your questions. You can see this rubric on the following post: http://amgfun.blogspot.ca/2013/02/wednesday-february-13-2013.html
This will be the last reminder about this. Your script will need to be set up with your questions and answers and should have Level 1-4 questions and answers.
Twister
ReplyDeleteRafael Silva and some members of his family are moving to Kansas and there are a lot of tornadoes there.
USE THE DATE FOR THE ENTRY: Tuesday, January 8, 2013
ReplyDelete- remember to use correct punctuation (capital sentences and periods)
NUMBER EACH ANSWER FOR EACH QUESTION:
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jan,17
ReplyDelete1)she's going home.
2)she got shot in the head&neck.
3)she will fight for woman right.
Thanks for answering the questions. I would like to see you add some more details to your answers to make them stronger.
ReplyDeleteFor example, she is going home, but where is she leaving? Based on the evidence in the picture, you could write something like:
She is going home to her family after leaving the hospital.
Also, she was shot in the head and neck but by who?
The last question could use part of the question in it to make it clearer: When she returns to Pakistan, she will fight for women's rights.
wed,jan 23/13
ReplyDelete1.What is your painting called?
1.Wounderland
2.How is your painting an example of your happiness?
2.Its very colourfull&fantisy.
3.How will you use the image of the painting to remind you of being happy?
3.Ever time i look at my painting i think a happy though.
I like your very colourful piece called Wonderland. What is it about colour and fantasy that makes you happy? Adding a few more details would make your work a lot stronger and richer. I know you have some great ideas!
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you might take a look at this work and think some happy thoughts.
To make your writing clearer, I would take a listen to your writing in Read and Write Gold and make changes to your work. There are a few mistakes which you should correct ("though" should be spelled thought, "colourfull" and "fanitsy" should be spelled colourful and fantasy).
Keep up you determined efforts, Bishop.
Chris Spence blog entry needs to be completed.
ReplyDeleteMarch,7/13
ReplyDeleteHarriet Tubman is a African-American.
she was also a spy for the American army during the civil war.
she rescued more than 70 slaves.
she never lost anyone rescue.
Good for you, Bishop. I am glad to see you get started on this.
ReplyDeleteIt looks as though you have your Level 1 question: Who is Harriet Tubman?
I would think of adding some more details about where the slaves were rescued from and where they were brought to. Maybe you can answer those questions as you moved into your Level 2-4 questions.
Keep at it!
who is she?
ReplyDeletewhat did she do?
ReplyDeleteis it ture that she never lost anyone?
ReplyDeletewhat dose she do?
ReplyDeleteYou have a series of questions, but I want to remind you to make sure you use the questioning rubric to set up your questions. You can see this rubric on the following post:
ReplyDeletehttp://amgfun.blogspot.ca/2013/02/wednesday-february-13-2013.html
This will be the last reminder about this. Your script will need to be set up with your questions and answers and should have Level 1-4 questions and answers.