this man ruined his reputeshon thar are people who look up to chris spens all this mans work went to wast just because of one thing a cheat in work but you got to give him some crdit he was doing a good
Dr. Spence has done a lot of great work and, for some, his reputation means nothing. He was doing great work in a very hard job but you are right, cheating is cheating and he has to deal with his consequences.
This is your first Reading Response and I know you are learning how to do them. I am going to post the format of how to follow it. Usually you do this:
Retell what the article was about. Relate to the article by making connections to things that may have happened in your life or experience. Reflect on the article and ask some questions that may be going through your mind as you were reading it or after you read it.
Thanks for your short note and apology. I read it this morning. People make mistakes but move on after they figure out what they did wrong. Even though homework is not one of your most favourite things to do, it is a part of school.
Just take each assignment once step at a time. I was telling your Mom about how you worked really hard yesterday. Some days will be easier than others, but that's how life is. If you need help, please ask for it. The fact that you are asking questions is a good sign. Have a good day.
THANK YOU AGAIN I KNOW I STILL HAVE ALL LOT OF LEARNING TO DO BUT ONE STEP AT A TIME IT SOUNDS GOOD SO I'LL TRY HARDER BUT I HAVE NOT BEEN ONOST SOME OF MY WORK I GEST BECASE IT WAS TO HARD
Your superhero story is very interesting. Before the end of the year, we will do a project involving superheroes and the strengths we have. I think you should keep this story safe for when we do this assignment.
I would like to see you add some details to your project relating to Black history. Also, I need to see you get into a more regular habit of taking your homework and doing it. If you do this, I think you will find that school is not as stressful and your Mom is not on your case asking you about school. She does this because she cares about you.
what i say i know matters what you say matters what every one says matters every time i think of black history i feel bad because i could imagine the pain the anger the sadness of them so if i was alive back when slavere was still happening i would take a stand for what is right every one diservs ther own freedome
what i say i know matters what you say matters what every one says matters every time i think of black history i feel bad because i could imagine the pain the anger the sadness of them so if i was alive back when slavere was still happening i would take a stand for what is right every one diservs ther own freedome
Before you write, you need to ask your 4 questions I think your topic is very interesting. Freedom is an important concept to all people, especially to a group of people who have had a very difficult to write 3 sentences.
I am going to help you out with the 2 more difficult ones-- the Level 3 and 4 questions. You will have to figure out the answers to these questions.
Level 4: Why would a group of people want to be free?
Level 3: What might a group of people do to be free?
Level 2:
Level 1:
The last 2 questions I leave up to you to figure out and do.
I am trying to get you to think of a question and then to do some reading before you answer it.
Doing this will give your project some structure instead of just having a lot of ideas without any main idea. I am trying to keep you focused on your topic by providing some structure.
Since you will only be doing these 2 questions, I want you to add something to your answers.
Please explain why a person would be "lost" without freedom? Can you give me an example to explain this a little more?
What happens if the right to do whatever you want is something dangerous or could hurt another person?
If you are doing the topic of freedom, I would like you to think of a question that relates to someone with roots in Africa. I really like your topic, but I would like you to connect it with the assignment I gave the class.
I know this requires some thinking and research but this is your responsibility as a student. Otherwise, this project will be too easy and not challenge you or prepare you for the kind of work you may face in high school.
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ReplyDeletethis man ruined his reputeshon thar are people who look up to chris spens all this mans work went to wast just because of one thing a cheat in work but you got to give him some crdit he was doing a good
job befor this mess happend anyway he knew i knew everybody knew that what he was doing was wrong.
ReplyDeleteThis is a very thoughtful response, Ellis.
ReplyDeleteDr. Spence has done a lot of great work and, for some, his reputation means nothing. He was doing great work in a very hard job but you are right, cheating is cheating and he has to deal with his consequences.
This is your first Reading Response and I know you are learning how to do them. I am going to post the format of how to follow it. Usually you do this:
Retell what the article was about.
Relate to the article by making connections to things that may have happened in your life or experience.
Reflect on the article and ask some questions that may be going through your mind as you were reading it or after you read it.
Good start, Ellis.
Thanks for your short note and apology. I read it this morning. People make mistakes but move on after they figure out what they did wrong. Even though homework is not one of your most favourite things to do, it is a part of school.
DeleteJust take each assignment once step at a time. I was telling your Mom about how you worked really hard yesterday. Some days will be easier than others, but that's how life is. If you need help, please ask for it. The fact that you are asking questions is a good sign. Have a good day.
Your wrote one other thing but I am not sure what you meant about "catching a guy doing wrong." Were you talking about Lance Armstrong?
DeleteTHANK YOU AGAIN I KNOW I STILL HAVE ALL LOT OF LEARNING TO DO BUT ONE STEP AT A TIME IT SOUNDS GOOD SO I'LL TRY HARDER BUT I HAVE NOT BEEN ONOST SOME OF MY WORK I GEST BECASE IT WAS TO HARD
DeleteWHAT DID YOU THINK ABOUT MY SUPER HERO STORY IF YOU HAVE ANY QUESSTION LET ME KNOW OR IF YOU THINK IT NEEDS MORE DEATALS
DeleteYour superhero story is very interesting. Before the end of the year, we will do a project involving superheroes and the strengths we have. I think you should keep this story safe for when we do this assignment.
ReplyDeleteI would like to see you add some details to your project relating to Black history. Also, I need to see you get into a more regular habit of taking your homework and doing it. If you do this, I think you will find that school is not as stressful and your Mom is not on your case asking you about school. She does this because she cares about you.
Thanks and have a good day.
my thouts and spech about black history
Deletewhat i say i know matters what you say matters what every one says matters every time i think of black history i feel bad because i could imagine the pain the anger the sadness of them so if i was alive back when slavere was still happening i would take a stand for what is right every one diservs ther own freedome
Just to add to your note about the work: you have to make sure you take your work home and do a little bit of it.
ReplyDeleteMake the effort and ask a question and I will be sure to help you.
all rights
ReplyDeleteevery one knows what a right is a right is a deed to do something no matter what it is we the people have rights sutch as speaking
a mans greates wepon is his words as martin luther king jr has proven
ReplyDeletemy thouts and spech about black history
ReplyDeletewhat i say i know matters what you say matters what every one says matters every time i think of black history i feel bad because i could imagine the pain the anger the sadness of them so if i was alive back when slavere was still happening i would take a stand for what is right every one diservs ther own freedome
Before you write, you need to ask your 4 questions I think your topic is very interesting. Freedom is an important concept to all people, especially to a group of people who have had a very difficult to write 3 sentences.
I am going to help you out with the 2 more difficult ones-- the Level 3 and 4 questions. You will have to figure out the answers to these questions.
Level 4: Why would a group of people want to be free?
Level 3: What might a group of people do to be free?
Level 2:
Level 1:
The last 2 questions I leave up to you to figure out and do.
I am trying to get you to think of a question and then to do some reading before you answer it.
ReplyDeleteDoing this will give your project some structure instead of just having a lot of ideas without any main idea. I am trying to keep you focused on your topic by providing some structure.
2why is freedom so important? freedom is so important because with out it we would be lost
ReplyDelete1what does freedom mean to you? freedom means to have a right to have the right and abillte to do what ever you want
Since you will only be doing these 2 questions, I want you to add something to your answers.
ReplyDeletePlease explain why a person would be "lost" without freedom? Can you give me an example to explain this a little more?
What happens if the right to do whatever you want is something dangerous or could hurt another person?
If you are doing the topic of freedom, I would like you to think of a question that relates to someone with roots in Africa. I really like your topic, but I would like you to connect it with the assignment I gave the class.
I know this requires some thinking and research but this is your responsibility as a student. Otherwise, this project will be too easy and not challenge you or prepare you for the kind of work you may face in high school.
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ReplyDeleteYou need to work on your Strengths and Struggles portion of the assignment.
ReplyDeleteYour hero looks cool.