Chapter 1: Alexandra is a rich girl who has everyhing but its hard for her to make friends because everyone is jealouse and wants her for her money. She has a boddy graud Jerrilny they went to the store to buy a dress for alex because she was going to her dads party but Jerrilny got hurt.
Chapter 2: As Jerrilny got hurt she was conscious Alex made a run for it but the man and the woman were right behind her so she headed for the ali but she didnt know what to do so she made her way up a the stairs that go to the top of the roof she got up there and the man and woman were behind her she see an adjacent roof and made a jump for she made it safe but when she leaded over the edge she seen Jerrilney. Jerrilney screamed her name and told her to make her way down and everthing will be safe so she did she jumped it wasnt a high jump she landed in the garbagge and jumped out but she was to late the woman and the man we there wating for her and they took a rag and covered her mouth she was seeing bits of grey spots and in her eyes but she manged to she Jerrilney her only friend just satnding there behind the man not doing anything
Chapter 2: As Jerrilny got hurt she was conscious Alex made a run for it but the man and the woman were right behind her so headed for the ali but she didnt know what to do so she made her way up a the stairs that go to the top of the roof she got up there and the man and woman were behind her she see an adjacent roof and made a jump for she made it safe but when she leaded over the edge she seen Jerrilney, Jerrilney screamed her name and told her to make her way down and everthing will be safe so she did she jumped it wasnt a high jump she landed in the garbagge and jumped out but she was to late the woman and the man we there wating for her and they took a rang and covered her mouth she was seeing bits of grey stop and in her eyes but she manged to she Jerrilney her only friend just satnding t=behind the man npt doing anything
Thanks for answering the questions. I like the detail you added in question 2. Not many people remembered that point.
In question number 2, I don't think that it was a drive by shooting. I believe one of the Taliban members boarded the bus to specifically locate and shoot Malala.
In that same answer I suggest you use her name in the answer. For example: Malala was coming back from her Dad's private school....
I have encouraged some of the other students to use Read and Write Gold to listen to your writing to make sure it sounds smooth and make corrections to your work.
Number 2: It explains my happiness by colors for feelings , for emample blue is sad, green is happy and orange is normal, some songs explain who you are, and your feelings and music does that for me.
Number 3: Well music is ever were and theres millios of songs for me to choose from and that image reminds me the music will never die.
I love music as well, Ariane and enjoy listening to different types depending on the kind of mood I am in. Music creates so many different emotions.
I hope you will look around and think about some of the songs you may love so much which make you happy.
I would suggest that you copy your work into MS Word and run a spell and grammar check so you can make some corrections to your work. If you listen to it, you may also hear where you may need to alter or change some of the writing you have done.
Chris Spence Canandas Largest Education Director of the TDBS got caught doing plagiasim on January 5 from copying someones work that was publish in 1989 New York Times column and an online encyclopedia. Chis Spence worte an apologies letter to everyone saying his sorrys and that he feels ashamed and embarrassed by what i did.
I wounder why: If he is education director of the TDSB why is he doing plagiasim woundn't he know how to wright stuff in his own words?? if he really smart, even if therer is presure on him, he only wrote a paragraph thats short.
I do not think it is possible for Dr. Spence to be the Director of Education. I am not sure if he will be able to be a director anywhere else. I think he is an excellent teacher who made a serious mistake but this issue of people trusting him will be a big one.
You asked a good question about if he knew about writing. He should have known better and is a very smart man but maybe he was feeling pressured. Still, that is no excuse for cheating.
You did a complete job on this Reading Response, Ariane. Good for you. One question for you: Do you think he should have been fired?
Chris Spence: Do I think Chirs Spence should get his job back? I dont know see everyone makes mistakes but everyone one looks up to him as a role mottel, and what he did wasnt right, to be honest by the fact that he took his time to find that article he should of bin thinking or a paragraph to wright, but everyone makes mistakes and hopefully he learn from his, I think he should have his job back, one more chance.
Good for you for responding to my question and adding some more detail to your response. Yeah, he did make a mistake but he has a very important job and HE IS a role model. To cheat (plagiarize) for such a long period of time requires a lot of planning; excellent point! He should have been focused on trying to be original instead of looking for a short cut. Maybe if there was only 1 example of cheating, he would have been forgiven or something, but there were so many examples!
What is Black Slavery In Canada: Many black slaverys took the underground rail road from the shouthern USA to go to Canada to be free, there wasnt that much slavery in Canada but some British Empries brought there slaves to Canada to be bought,sold or to die and in chain. On July 9 slaves would not be freed, but no new slaves could be brought into the province, and children of female slaves would be freed at age 25. This act kept going intill 1833 when the British Empire abolished slavery completely.
Level 1 Question: What is Black Slavery In Canada?:
Level 1 Answer: Black Slavery is when black people were slaved * forced to do work* by white people.
Level 2 Question: What did they do?:
Level 2 Answer: Many black slaverys took the underground rail road from the shouthern USA to go to Canada to be free, there wasnt that much slavery in Canada but some British Empries brought there slaves to Canada to be bought,sold or to die and in chain. On July 9 slaves would not be freed, but no new slaves could be brought into the province, and children of female slaves would be freed at age 25. This act kept going intill 1833 when the British Empire abolished slavery completely.
Level 3 Question: When did it start and end?:
Level 3 Answer: 1830's to 1833.
Level 4 Question: What happen to them when they were free?:
Level 4 Answer: In 1833 the british empire trade for slaves stoped, some slaves were foused to go to Europeans to New France, Acadia and later British North America, during the 17th century. They were house servants and farm workers.
This attricle is about an explosion in Central Prague on Monday, many people were ingured during this accident that probably had to invole gas, people say 40 people were hurt and some say the buildings and the National Theatre had to be all evacauted. A ploice spokesmen said that there was at least 15 people in the building. An emergency spokewoman said that some people were traped in the Czech Air Navigation Services company.
Your retell sounds too much like a plagarized copy from this article: http://www.reuters.com/article/2013/04/29/us-czech-explosion-idUSBRE93S08620130429
Please read the article on your own and retell it in your own words. If the article seems too difficult, select an easier one. Your relate is correct because both incidents (Boston and Prague) involved a bomb. I imagine that some of the witnesses may have been hurt, if they were far enough away.
The Girl Who Had Everything
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Chapter 1: Alexandra is a rich girl who has everyhing but its hard for her to make friends because everyone is jealouse and wants her for her money. She has a boddy graud Jerrilny they went to the store to buy a dress for alex because she was going to her dads party but Jerrilny got hurt.
I spelt *Jealous wrong
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Chapter 2: As Jerrilny got hurt she was conscious Alex made a run for it but the man and the woman were right behind her so she headed for the ali but she didnt know what to do so she made her way up a the stairs that go to the top of the roof she got up there and the man and woman were behind her she see an adjacent roof and made a jump for she made it safe but when she leaded over the edge she seen Jerrilney. Jerrilney screamed her name and told her to make her way down and everthing will be safe so she did she jumped it wasnt a high jump she landed in the garbagge and jumped out but she was to late the woman and the man we there wating for her and they took a rag and covered her mouth she was seeing bits of grey spots and in her eyes but she manged to she Jerrilney her only friend just satnding there behind the man not doing anything
The Girl Who Had Everyting
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Chapter 2: As Jerrilny got hurt she was conscious Alex made a run for it but the man and the woman were right behind her so headed for the ali but she didnt know what to do so she made her way up a the stairs that go to the top of the roof she got up there and the man and woman were behind her she see an adjacent roof and made a jump for she made it safe but when she leaded over the edge she seen Jerrilney, Jerrilney screamed her name and told her to make her way down and everthing will be safe so she did she jumped it wasnt a high jump she landed in the garbagge and jumped out but she was to late the woman and the man we there wating for her and they took a rang and covered her mouth she was seeing bits of grey stop and in her eyes but she manged to she Jerrilney her only friend just satnding t=behind the man npt doing anything
Number 1: Malala Yousafzai was at Toronto star eraly January
ReplyDeleteNumber 2: Coming back from he dad privat school she got off the buss and got shot by a drive by
Number 3: i think she will still contuine for fighting for girls rights to learn anmd go to school
The ideas in all of your answers are almost all correct. That would also include checking your spelling for errors.
ReplyDeleteMake sure to Make sure to read over your responses are in complete sentences and have a clear meaning. Use Read and Write Gold to listen to your work.
For example, question 1 could have a clearer message:
Malala Yousafzai was in the Toronto Star coming out of the hospital in the UK.
Making changes would make this clearer and improve your mark.
Numer 1: Malala yousafzai was at Toronto Star early January
ReplyDeleteNumber 1: Malala Yousafzai was at Toronto Star early January.
ReplyDeleteNumber 2: Coming back from he dads private school she got off the buss and was shot by a a brive by.
ReplyDeleteNumber 3: I think she will still continue fight for girls rights to learn and participate in school.
ReplyDeleteJanuary 15 2013
ReplyDeleteThanks for answering the questions. I like the detail you added in question 2. Not many people remembered that point.
ReplyDeleteIn question number 2, I don't think that it was a drive by shooting. I believe one of the Taliban members boarded the bus to specifically locate and shoot Malala.
In that same answer I suggest you use her name in the answer. For example: Malala was coming back from her Dad's private school....
I have encouraged some of the other students to use Read and Write Gold to listen to your writing to make sure it sounds smooth and make corrections to your work.
Number 1: Feeling Music.
ReplyDeleteNumber 2: It explains my happiness by colors for feelings , for emample blue is sad, green is happy and orange is normal, some songs explain who you are, and your feelings and music does that for me.
Number 3: Well music is ever were and theres millios of songs for me to choose from and that image reminds me the music will never die.
I love music as well, Ariane and enjoy listening to different types depending on the kind of mood I am in. Music creates so many different emotions.
DeleteI hope you will look around and think about some of the songs you may love so much which make you happy.
I would suggest that you copy your work into MS Word and run a spell and grammar check so you can make some corrections to your work. If you listen to it, you may also hear where you may need to alter or change some of the writing you have done.
Chris Spence Canandas Largest Education Director of the TDBS got caught doing plagiasim on January 5 from copying someones work that was publish in 1989 New York Times column and an online encyclopedia.
ReplyDeleteChis Spence worte an apologies letter to everyone saying his sorrys and that he feels ashamed and embarrassed by what i did.
This Makes Me Think: If Chris Spence will become the Education Director of the TDSB again and if people would trust him.
ReplyDeleteI wounder why: If he is education director of the TDSB why is he doing plagiasim woundn't he know how to wright stuff in his own words?? if he really smart, even if therer is presure on him, he only wrote a paragraph thats short.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your entry, Ariane.
ReplyDeleteI do not think it is possible for Dr. Spence to be the Director of Education. I am not sure if he will be able to be a director anywhere else. I think he is an excellent teacher who made a serious mistake but this issue of people trusting him will be a big one.
You asked a good question about if he knew about writing. He should have known better and is a very smart man but maybe he was feeling pressured. Still, that is no excuse for cheating.
You did a complete job on this Reading Response, Ariane. Good for you. One question for you: Do you think he should have been fired?
Chris Spence: Do I think Chirs Spence should get his job back? I dont know see everyone makes mistakes but everyone one looks up to him as a role mottel, and what he did wasnt right, to be honest by the fact that he took his time to find that article he should of bin thinking or a paragraph to wright, but everyone makes mistakes and hopefully he learn from his, I think he should have his job back, one more chance.
ReplyDeleteGood for you for responding to my question and adding some more detail to your response.
ReplyDeleteYeah, he did make a mistake but he has a very important job and HE IS a role model. To cheat (plagiarize) for such a long period of time requires a lot of planning; excellent point! He should have been focused on trying to be original instead of looking for a short cut.
Maybe if there was only 1 example of cheating, he would have been forgiven or something, but there were so many examples!
What is Black Slavery In Canada: Many black slaverys took the underground rail road from the shouthern USA to go to Canada to be free, there wasnt that much slavery in Canada but some British Empries brought there slaves to Canada to be bought,sold or to die and in chain.
ReplyDeleteOn July 9 slaves would not be freed, but no new slaves could be brought into the province, and children of female slaves would be freed at age 25. This act kept going intill 1833 when the British Empire abolished slavery completely.
Your Level 2 - 4 questions need to be completed today. Please use the chart, think of your topic and get them done today.
ReplyDeleteYou can do it!
Black Slavery is when black people were slaved by white people
ReplyDeleteHere is the full Oprah interview that is 15 minutes long.
ReplyDeletehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CW7pOqLNyGE
When did black slavery end in Canada? Black Slavery happen in the 1830's and ended in 1833.
ReplyDeleteDouble check the chart. Using it will help you set up your questions.
ReplyDeleteThe last question is a Level 1. To change it up to be a Level 2, I will give you a question, but you will need to figure out the response:
Why did slavery become outlawed in Canada?
Check this website to help you read through the information for the answer.
http://www.thecanadianencyclopedia.com/articles/slavery
Level 1 Question: What is Black Slavery In Canada?:
ReplyDeleteLevel 1 Answer: Black Slavery is when black people were slaved * forced to do work* by white people.
Level 2 Question: What did they do?:
Level 2 Answer: Many black slaverys took the underground rail road from the shouthern USA to go to Canada to be free, there wasnt that much slavery in Canada but some British Empries brought there slaves to Canada to be bought,sold or to die and in chain.
On July 9 slaves would not be freed, but no new slaves could be brought into the province, and children of female slaves would be freed at age 25. This act kept going intill 1833 when the British Empire abolished slavery completely.
Level 3 Question: When did it start and end?:
Level 3 Answer: 1830's to 1833.
Level 4 Question: What happen to them when they were free?:
Level 4 Answer: In 1833 the british empire trade for slaves stoped, some slaves were foused to go to Europeans to New France, Acadia and later British North America, during the 17th century. They were house servants and farm workers.
You have some excellent information but your questions have not been set up from Level 1-4.
ReplyDeleteLook at the chart on this blog page:
http://amgfun.blogspot.ca/2013/02/wednesday-february-13-2013.html
The Level 1-3 questions look like Level 1 questions. Double check the chart and go back to your questions.
Building Explosion Shakes Central Prague :
ReplyDeleteThis attricle is about an explosion in Central Prague on Monday, many people were ingured during this accident that probably had to invole gas, people say 40 people were hurt and some say the buildings and the National Theatre had to be all evacauted. A ploice spokesmen said that there was at least 15 people in the building. An emergency spokewoman said that some people were traped in the Czech Air Navigation Services company.
This makes me feel...
ReplyDeleteCurious because its like the bombing that happen in Boston and the bombing in Boston wasn't that long ago.
I wounder:
ReplyDeleteIf the people who seen this were hurt?
Your retell sounds too much like a plagarized copy from this article:
ReplyDeletehttp://www.reuters.com/article/2013/04/29/us-czech-explosion-idUSBRE93S08620130429
Please read the article on your own and retell it in your own words. If the article seems too difficult, select an easier one.
Your relate is correct because both incidents (Boston and Prague) involved a bomb. I imagine that some of the witnesses may have been hurt, if they were far enough away.
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