When Chole finds a bead boby, everyone assumeds that it is davied micheall is th killer-he was the one who vowed to deffend his people land by means necessery. And tow witness spotted Davied Micheal near the crime scene so why isn't chloe convinced? the trouble is, there's no evidence that point to anyone eles. Not a trace
USE THE DATE FOR THE ENTRY: Tuesday, January 8, 2013
- remember to use correct punctuation (capital sentences and periods)
Use the information from the article (headlines) to help answer the question. Malala was being released from the hospital in the UK.
The second question is correct but could use some more information to make it stronger. For example: "She was shot by the Taliban for speaking out for the right for girls to get an education."
1. In the picuter Malala was leaving health care after her ingery in Pakastand by the taladan.
2. Malala was shout decause she did interview with the bbc and after 2 yearersshe was nomanated for a award but she would only win is she sayed sayed how she really was so she did and that put her in danger because she got shout in the head and neck.
3. When she reatuns I think she will start a mod a gainst the Tallandan how were the couse of this injury.
As I have suggested before, listen to your answers using Read and Write Gold to make sure things sound correctly before publishing.
I am glad to see you put in thought and effort into your answers. They are very detailed answers. I am sure Malala will continue to fight for the right of girls to have an education.
1. My paiting is called the wall of nothing. I calle it that because it is a wall in my room were when i am made i stare at it and I lear my mind and think about nothing.
2.My paiting is white on the the wall and brown on the flour. I put my first name on the wall in brown so u can see it and I put my last name in brown. I drew my picture becuse when my bucket it emty I just staire at my wall and I fill up my bucket T dont know how but it just hanpinds.
3. My painting helps my because every time i look at it my minde clears.
Thanks for the detailed thoughts you put into thinking about your painting. Your job will be remembering to think about that wall when things become stressful or challenging for you.
I thought it was really cool that you could look at wall and make a connection to how it might help fill up your bucket.
As I have suggested in the past, try using Read and Write Gold to help you proof-read your work before publishing. Keep up the hard work!
This is about the director of the TDSB. Chris Spencer how is the head of the TDSB was committing plagiarism many time. People found out that he was committing plagiarism after copying a story that was write-in in 1989 I think well after he publish It I woman noticed that was not the first time he has committed plagiarism other times. I wonder why he plagiarized.
Plagiarism is a form of cheating. You did a good job commenting on what the article was about and the fact that Dr. Spence has cheated more that once with his writing.
I wanted you to follow the format of a regular Reading Response and make connections with what it reminded you of and how it made you feel. I am going to post the parts of a Reading Response of the blog so you can follow it better when you do another one.
Your question about plagiarism is similar to a question about why anyone would cheat or lie? Have you ever thought about that before? If you think about this, maybe you'll get a sense of what was going through Dr. Spence's head when he made the error he did.
To polish up your work, cut and paste it into a program so you can listen to it and check it for spelling. Thanks for your response.
Georg Washinton Carver was a sientis how invented peanut butterCarver's reputation is based on his research into and promotion of alternative crops to cotton.
i got my info from:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/George_Washington_Carver
part 1: • He was a scientist • He owned a peanut farm • 105 food recipes using peanuts • He gained enough money to afford college to learn art • He was the only black person at the collage • Everyone respected him • He wanted to turn science into product • He develop over 300 peanut uses • And 100 uses for the sweat potato • After world war 1 he had become a legend • He died and was put next to his friend hooker t Washington • He was known as the plant doctor • He earned a certificate of married and had to move •
• He was a scientist • He owned a peanut farm • 105 food recipes using peanuts • He gained enough money to afford college to learn art • He was the only black person at the collage • Everyone respected him • He wanted to turn science into product • He develop over 300 peanut uses • And 100 uses for the sweat potato • After world war 1 he had become a legend • He died and was put next to his friend hooker t Washington • He was known as the plant doctor • He earned a certificate of married and had to move •
1.Who is the man who invented penutbutter? Georg Washington Carver 2.why will georg washington carver? they well rememder you by the man who made more than 108 uses for penutbutter 3. What would people know him as? the man who inveted penutbutter and the flower doctor. 4.why might people say he wasn't the creater of penutbuter? they would say that because he is black
I think your question for 2 is missing a word. It could be written as:
Why will George Washington Carver be remembered?
For your Level 3 answer, I think you should explain what you mean by "the flower doctor." Please explain this more.
Your Level 4 question is very good. I would suggest you explain that a little more. What about him being Black man would make people say that. Think about it and talk to me about this.
You have made the most progress with this project in class. Very good work!
This is about North Korea and USA were on red alert because Korea was doing a test lunch of their knuckler The pat I disliked was the part that they were in red alert
This reminds me of a movie I watched called dictator This make me feel sad cause of all the violence going on I wonder why they r always fighting and getting into war
Good for you for typing this, but if you do your Reading Responses like this, please include: - the title of the article
Try to keep track of your spelling of key words like "nuclear." Who was in red alert? You need to make the connection more about The Dictator. How did the situation with North Korea remind you of that film?
North Korea is a country with a lot of issues. In some ways, the country is acting kind of like a bully. Usually bullies have issues that they need to work out.
You're right, war is a sad thing. So many lives can be put at risk!
I am glad to see you enjoying completing these responses on a regular basis.
You only need to do one entry, John, for 1 article. Just focus on one, do a good job and review and edit it, then it will be okay. More does not always mean better.
As you can see from your last entry, there are periods missing along with capital letters. Writing this in Microsoft Word would help you pay attention to those things.
Please write in the name of the article, so I will know what it is about. You should be able to state where the event happened because I am sure the article said this as well as the cause of the accident. You made a good connection with the time that you burned down your house. When did you do that? Yikes, was anyone hurt? I set a mattress on fire when I was in Grade 2 or 3, but the house did not burn down.
Was the factory collapsing related to the explosion you wrote about? Do you know who worked in the factory and in what country? These are details which need to be added to show that you understand what you are reading.
The explosion in the factory was in Bangladesh. They made clothes there for a company called Joe Fresh. They sell GAP style clothes in some Loblaws stores.
This about 3 brothers who kidnap 3 girls and they have been kidnap for 10 years. The most important part is that the girls are not hurt because if they were that would be hurdle. I like the part when I heard they were recued. This reminds me of when a man in my old school was following 3 guys and 9 girls in and 1 girls was kidnap but they found her the next day. It makes me feel sad and happy I was sad because she was kidnap for 10 years and happy cause they r not harmed. I wonder y they kidnaped the girls.
This is a better effort with more thought to the sections you are supposed to write about.
Think about adding more detail to where this incident happened. I am sure the article would have mentioned how the women suffered a lot while being in captive for those 10 years.
What school did this happen at? That is scary. Why do you think the girls, who are now women, were kidnapped? Why do people decide to hurt other people?
Pay attention to your sentences. Be sure you are writing in full sentences when you are trying to get your ideas across.
So, this hero can sometimes be mean. Interesting. I like that because it is kind of original and realistic because all people are capable of being mean. You are a fast runner. Can you think of something more specific that you can add about being strong? Is there something you do that shows you're strong? and strong
That is a good one about not paying attention. I would have that problem to and an enemy would be able to use that against him.
The reason I want you to add some details has to do with the sentences you are going to write about your hero.
Good job starting this project. You may continue designing your hero and thinking about other details you can add to your hero.
when chole finds a body everyone asumes it was that david mitchell is the killer.
ReplyDeleteWhen Choles find a body everyone assumes that it was David Michell
ReplyDeletenot a trace
ReplyDeletenorah mcclintock
Not a trace Noarah McClintock
ReplyDeleteWhen Chole finds a bead boby, everyone assumeds that it is davied micheall is th killer-he was the one who vowed to deffend his people land by means necessery. And tow witness spotted Davied Micheal near the crime scene so why isn't chloe convinced? the trouble is, there's no evidence that point to anyone eles. Not a trace
ReplyDelete1. she is geting health care beacause she got shot
ReplyDelete2.she was shot
3. if malla whent back she pakistand she fight for girls right to go to school.
2. she was shot after boing a artical about live in pakistand
ReplyDeletejan 18 2013
ReplyDeleteUSE THE DATE FOR THE ENTRY: Tuesday, January 8, 2013
ReplyDelete- remember to use correct punctuation (capital sentences and periods)
Use the information from the article (headlines) to help answer the question. Malala was being released from the hospital in the UK.
The second question is correct but could use some more information to make it stronger. For example: "She was shot by the Taliban for speaking out for the right for girls to get an education."
tuseday,january 15 2013
ReplyDelete1. In the picuter Malala was leaving health care after her ingery in Pakastand by the taladan.
2. Malala was shout decause she did interview with the bbc and after 2 yearersshe was nomanated for a award but she would only win is she sayed sayed how she really was so she did and that put her in danger because she got shout in the head and neck.
3. When she reatuns I think she will start a mod a gainst the Tallandan how were the couse of this injury.
As I have suggested before, listen to your answers using Read and Write Gold to make sure things sound correctly before publishing.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see you put in thought and effort into your answers. They are very detailed answers. I am sure Malala will continue to fight for the right of girls to have an education.
1. My paiting is called the wall of nothing. I calle it that because it is a wall in my room were when i am made i stare at it and I lear my mind and think about nothing.
ReplyDelete2.My paiting is white on the the wall and brown on the flour. I put my first name on the wall in brown so u can see it and I put my last name in brown. I drew my picture becuse when my bucket it emty I just staire at my wall and I fill up my bucket T dont know how but it just hanpinds.
3. My painting helps my because every time i look at it my minde clears.
Thanks for the detailed thoughts you put into thinking about your painting. Your job will be remembering to think about that wall when things become stressful or challenging for you.
ReplyDeleteI thought it was really cool that you could look at wall and make a connection to how it might help fill up your bucket.
As I have suggested in the past, try using Read and Write Gold to help you proof-read your work before publishing.
Keep up the hard work!
This is about the director of the TDSB. Chris Spencer how is the head of the TDSB was committing plagiarism many time. People found out that he was committing plagiarism after copying a story that was write-in in 1989 I think well after he publish It I woman noticed that was not the first time he has committed plagiarism other times. I wonder why he plagiarized.
ReplyDeletePlagiarism is a form of cheating.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job commenting on what the article was about and the fact that Dr. Spence has cheated more that once with his writing.
I wanted you to follow the format of a regular Reading Response and make connections with what it reminded you of and how it made you feel. I am going to post the parts of a Reading Response of the blog so you can follow it better when you do another one.
Your question about plagiarism is similar to a question about why anyone would cheat or lie? Have you ever thought about that before? If you think about this, maybe you'll get a sense of what was going through Dr. Spence's head when he made the error he did.
To polish up your work, cut and paste it into a program so you can listen to it and check it for spelling.
Thanks for your response.
lol
DeleteGeorg Washinton Carver was a sientis how invented peanut butterCarver's reputation is based on his research into and promotion of alternative crops to cotton.
Deletei got my info from:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/George_Washington_Carver
part 1: • He was a scientist
ReplyDelete• He owned a peanut farm
• 105 food recipes using peanuts
• He gained enough money to afford college to learn art
• He was the only black person at the collage
• Everyone respected him
• He wanted to turn science into product
• He develop over 300 peanut uses
• And 100 uses for the sweat potato
• After world war 1 he had become a legend
• He died and was put next to his friend hooker t Washington
• He was known as the plant doctor
• He earned a certificate of married and had to move
•
• He was a scientist
ReplyDelete• He owned a peanut farm
• 105 food recipes using peanuts
• He gained enough money to afford college to learn art
• He was the only black person at the collage
• Everyone respected him
• He wanted to turn science into product
• He develop over 300 peanut uses
• And 100 uses for the sweat potato
• After world war 1 he had become a legend
• He died and was put next to his friend hooker t Washington
• He was known as the plant doctor
• He earned a certificate of married and had to move
•
Okay, you have a lot of information but you now have to figure out how to start organizing the information based on the Level 1 - Level 4 questions.
ReplyDeleteI would do this before you continue looking and gathering more information.
Good work, John.
1.Who is the man who invented penutbutter? Georg Washington Carver
ReplyDelete2.why will georg washington carver? they well rememder you by the man who made more than 108 uses for penutbutter
3. What would people know him as? the man who inveted penutbutter and the flower doctor.
4.why might people say he wasn't the creater of penutbuter? they would say that because he is black
I think your question for 2 is missing a word. It could be written as:
ReplyDeleteWhy will George Washington Carver be remembered?
For your Level 3 answer, I think you should explain what you mean by "the flower doctor." Please explain this more.
Your Level 4 question is very good. I would suggest you explain that a little more. What about him being Black man would make people say that. Think about it and talk to me about this.
You have made the most progress with this project in class. Very good work!
This is about North Korea and USA were on red alert because Korea was doing a test lunch of their knuckler
ReplyDeleteThe pat I disliked was the part that they were in red alert
This reminds me of a movie I watched called dictator
This make me feel sad cause of all the violence going on
I wonder why they r always fighting and getting into war
Good for you for typing this, but if you do your Reading Responses like this, please include:
ReplyDelete- the title of the article
Try to keep track of your spelling of key words like "nuclear."
Who was in red alert?
You need to make the connection more about The Dictator. How did the situation with North Korea remind you of that film?
North Korea is a country with a lot of issues. In some ways, the country is acting kind of like a bully. Usually bullies have issues that they need to work out.
You're right, war is a sad thing. So many lives can be put at risk!
I am glad to see you enjoying completing these responses on a regular basis.
This is about an explosion that happened. The explosion was caused by gas 40 people were injured most of the injury were cuts burned and scraps
ReplyDeleteThis is about an explosion that happened. The explosion was caused by gas 40 people were injured most of the injury were cuts burned and scraps
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of when I burned my old house down
I wonder how this building caught on fire dye oil
this about a guy house factory was calaps killin thouson of people he was braged to kort with a halmet and bulit prove jaket
ReplyDeletethis reminds me of this guy in cuda was beat and burned and hung because he was threatend of killin a chiled
i wonder how the biulding calaps and they wanted to hang him
You only need to do one entry, John, for 1 article. Just focus on one, do a good job and review and edit it, then it will be okay. More does not always mean better.
ReplyDeleteAs you can see from your last entry, there are periods missing along with capital letters. Writing this in Microsoft Word would help you pay attention to those things.
Please write in the name of the article, so I will know what it is about. You should be able to state where the event happened because I am sure the article said this as well as the cause of the accident.
You made a good connection with the time that you burned down your house. When did you do that? Yikes, was anyone hurt? I set a mattress on fire when I was in Grade 2 or 3, but the house did not burn down.
Was the factory collapsing related to the explosion you wrote about? Do you know who worked in the factory and in what country? These are details which need to be added to show that you understand what you are reading.
The explosion in the factory was in Bangladesh. They made clothes there for a company called Joe Fresh. They sell GAP style clothes in some Loblaws stores.
This about 3 brothers who kidnap 3 girls and they have been kidnap for 10 years.
ReplyDeleteThe most important part is that the girls are not hurt because if they were that would be hurdle.
I like the part when I heard they were recued.
This reminds me of when a man in my old school was following 3 guys and 9 girls in and 1 girls was kidnap but they found her the next day.
It makes me feel sad and happy I was sad because she was kidnap for 10 years and happy cause they r not harmed.
I wonder y they kidnaped the girls.
This is a better effort with more thought to the sections you are supposed to write about.
ReplyDeleteThink about adding more detail to where this incident happened. I am sure the article would have mentioned how the women suffered a lot while being in captive for those 10 years.
What school did this happen at? That is scary.
Why do you think the girls, who are now women, were kidnapped? Why do people decide to hurt other people?
Pay attention to your sentences. Be sure you are writing in full sentences when you are trying to get your ideas across.
he is good at mathe runung fast and being strong he is bad at payinf attencion reading and meanish
ReplyDeleteSo, this hero can sometimes be mean. Interesting. I like that because it is kind of original and realistic because all people are capable of being mean. You are a fast runner.
ReplyDeleteCan you think of something more specific that you can add about being strong? Is there something you do that shows you're strong? and strong
That is a good one about not paying attention. I would have that problem to and an enemy would be able to use that against him.
The reason I want you to add some details has to do with the sentences you are going to write about your hero.
Good job starting this project. You may continue designing your hero and thinking about other details you can add to your hero.
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ReplyDeletehi Mr.Proudfoot
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