Someone named Rollie works part time at Raven investigations services, and he dose serches for human assets and people. He is also hoping to enter the police academy class next spring
Anne Schraff. Someone named Rollie works part time at Raven investigations services, and he dose serches for human assets and people. He is also hoping to enter the police academy class next spring
Rollie went to dinner with April to see who the stalker is April thought she saw the stalker looking through the window. so Rollie apertended as if he went to the washroom but he went to the back, and saw an old man with an assistant. Rollie went back inside and told her he did not see him. Then April startd to cry.
Thanks for completing the questions but it looks like you are missing question 1.
Your answers are in complete sentences and make sense. I agree with you about question 3. Malala is a young women who will remain strong and fight for what she believes in.
If you are not certain about the spelling of certain words, I would suggest that you copy your responses into MS Word and use Read and Write Gold to listen to your answers and make any necessary changes. You will have other opportunities to try this out.
I really enjoy outdoor scenes and parks, as well. There is this really nice park our family discovered in Mississauga about 3 years ago. I can't remember the name, but it is by the Lake. A lot of families go there to have picnics.
The colours in your painting are deep and rich. When you have a special place with happy memories, it can bring you a lot of joy.
We will be doing some more sentence review work in class so you can tighten up some of your sentences and make them clearer.
This article is about a TDSB director named chirs spenc. sfter admiting that he has plagerized something from the internet and pasting it it on to the tornto star.
You only have the first portion of the Reading Response done on Dr. Spence. There is a lot of other information you could add (about further accusations of plagiarism) along with how you relate and reflect on the article. Please complete this Reading Response and publish it, if you would like to improve it (which I suggest you do).
We will be doing another group Reading Response soon.
These are good questions but seem to be all at the Level 1 level. Let me help you move this along. Let's look at question 2. You can use the same idea, but I will try to make it a Level 2: Why is he so famous?
Use the chart to help guide you. For your third question, you may need to re-word it. Look in the blue section of the chart, at the front of the room.
Glad to see you working on this at home. To add detail to your answers, you may want to find out about the other things Bob liked to do, besides singing. I know one of them but I am not going to tell :p
Be sure to go through each level to make sure you are on the correct path for all of your questions and answers. Your answers should have some detail, based on research, and not just on what you think.
Good. There is still some other information that you might want to add to about Bob Marley for question 3. I don't want to tell you because you will have to do that research yourself. :) Continue to work on setting up your animation project.
The bank of Canada has now recently came out with the new ten and five dollar. I think this is a good upgrade for Canada because paper money in general will get ripped, and wet, and badly crumpled, but the new dollar bill dose not get ripped, or wet, but it still gets crumpled, but not as much because of the material its made of. I wonder if other countries are changing the looks of their money.
You asked a very interesting question. I know the currency in the US and in Trinidad are still using paper money, but maybe they will think about changing it as well.
You seem to have made a good connection with what you are reading (the reasons why paper money does not seem to be that goof), but I am wondering if there was any other important information in the article you should mention. I am not sure. Since I don't have a copy of the paper, I can't say. I will have to pick up a copy of the paper so I can keep track of what you respond to and what the actual article says. Thoughtful work, Ewan.
I can lift up anything, I am fast, and I never die. but what i stuggle with is controlling my anger and its hard to controle my landing when i jump hight
It seems as though your "struggle" is probably most accurate. You seem to do a pretty good job at keeping the lid on your anger in class.
Your strengths have to do with the things, in real life, that you are good at. Think of your Art and other things that you have talents in. What other struggles might you have? Think of your school work or how you might relate to other people.
This is a good start, but try to add a few more details to strengthen your hero.
Anne Schraff. Someone named Rollie works part time at Raven investigations services, and he dose serches for human assets and people. He is also hoping to enter the police academy class next spring
ReplyDeleteits pretty interesting so far
ReplyDeleteRollie went to dinner with April to see who the stalker is April thought she saw the stalker looking through the window. so Rollie apertended as if he went to the washroom but he went to the back, and saw an old man with an assistant. Rollie went back inside and told her he did not see him. Then April startd to cry.
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ReplyDeletejan 8th 2013
malala yousefzai is leaving the hospitsal in the U.K
USE THE DATE FOR THE ENTRY: Tuesday, January 8, 2013
ReplyDelete- remember to use correct punctuation (capital sentences and periods)
NUMBER EACH ANSWER FOR EACH QUESTION:
1.
2. Malala got shot while leveing school after doing a project assginement.
ReplyDelete3. If Malala retuerns to pakistan she will probubly continue her activisum.
ReplyDeleteThanks for completing the questions but it looks like you are missing question 1.
ReplyDeleteYour answers are in complete sentences and make sense. I agree with you about question 3. Malala is a young women who will remain strong and fight for what she believes in.
If you are not certain about the spelling of certain words, I would suggest that you copy your responses into MS Word and use Read and Write Gold to listen to your answers and make any necessary changes. You will have other opportunities to try this out.
1.frank Mckechnie Park
ReplyDelete2.Because I like nature and who ever likes it aswell will might like thus painting.
3.I will think about when i use to live near that place and when i used meet my friends.
I really enjoy outdoor scenes and parks, as well. There is this really nice park our family discovered in Mississauga about 3 years ago. I can't remember the name, but it is by the Lake. A lot of families go there to have picnics.
ReplyDeleteThe colours in your painting are deep and rich. When you have a special place with happy memories, it can bring you a lot of joy.
We will be doing some more sentence review work in class so you can tighten up some of your sentences and make them clearer.
This article is about a TDSB director named chirs spenc. sfter admiting that he has plagerized something from the internet and pasting it it on to the tornto star.
ReplyDeleteYou only have the first portion of the Reading Response done on Dr. Spence. There is a lot of other information you could add (about further accusations of plagiarism) along with how you relate and reflect on the article.
ReplyDeletePlease complete this Reading Response and publish it, if you would like to improve it (which I suggest you do).
We will be doing another group Reading Response soon.
who is Bob Marley? Bob Marley is a sing the majority of people in the Caribbean look up to him.
ReplyDeletewhat did Bob Marley do? Bob Marley sang.
where did he do this? Bob Marley started doing this all in Jamaica in the 60's.
These are good questions but seem to be all at the Level 1 level.
ReplyDeleteLet me help you move this along.
Let's look at question 2. You can use the same idea, but I will try to make it a Level 2: Why is he so famous?
Use the chart to help guide you.
For your third question, you may need to re-word it. Look in the blue section of the chart, at the front of the room.
What would Bob Marley do if he weren't famous? Bob would probably carry on with what they say a regular life.
ReplyDeleteWhere would Bob Marley carry on? Bob would carry on in his home country or move to a different one to look for a better life.
how might he pull off having a "regular life"? Bob will look for jobs that he might get into if he weren't a star.
What would Bob Marley do if he weren't famous? Bob would probably carry on with what they say a regular life.
ReplyDeleteWhere would Bob Marley carry on? Bob would carry on in his home country or move to a different one to look for a better life.
how might he pull off having a "regular life"? Bob will look for jobs that he might get into if he weren't a star.
Glad to see you working on this at home.
ReplyDeleteTo add detail to your answers, you may want to find out about the other things Bob liked to do, besides singing. I know one of them but I am not going to tell :p
Be sure to go through each level to make sure you are on the correct path for all of your questions and answers. Your answers should have some detail, based on research, and not just on what you think.
Good work. Keep at it.
ReplyDeleteLevel 1 Question: Who is Bob Marley?
Level 1 Answer: Bob is a famous singer most known in the Carribean.
Level 2 Question: Why did Bob choose to sing than to do other dreams?
Level 2 Answer: becouse he wanted to make words stand out to people.
Level 3 Question: What would Bob marley do if he did'nt sing?
ReplyDeleteLevel 3 Answer: Mabey do something that spoke to people like his singing
Level 4 Question: How might he speak to people?
Level 4 Answer: He would probubly do poetree
Good.
ReplyDeleteThere is still some other information that you might want to add to about Bob Marley for question 3. I don't want to tell you because you will have to do that research yourself.
:)
Continue to work on setting up your animation project.
The bank of Canada has now recently came out with the new ten and five dollar. I think this is a good upgrade for Canada because paper money in general will get ripped, and wet, and badly crumpled, but the new dollar bill dose not get ripped, or wet, but it still gets crumpled, but not as much because of the material its made of. I wonder if other countries are changing the looks of their money.
ReplyDeleteYou asked a very interesting question. I know the currency in the US and in Trinidad are still using paper money, but maybe they will think about changing it as well.
ReplyDeleteYou seem to have made a good connection with what you are reading (the reasons why paper money does not seem to be that goof), but I am wondering if there was any other important information in the article you should mention. I am not sure. Since I don't have a copy of the paper, I can't say. I will have to pick up a copy of the paper so I can keep track of what you respond to and what the actual article says.
Thoughtful work, Ewan.
I can lift up anything, I am fast, and I never die. but what i stuggle with is controlling my anger and its hard to controle my landing when i jump hight
ReplyDeleteIt seems as though your "struggle" is probably most accurate. You seem to do a pretty good job at keeping the lid on your anger in class.
ReplyDeleteYour strengths have to do with the things, in real life, that you are good at. Think of your Art and other things that you have talents in. What other struggles might you have? Think of your school work or how you might relate to other people.
This is a good start, but try to add a few more details to strengthen your hero.
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