Jill's cosin died and her name is Aggie. Aggie worked in New York and she was sponsering a vietnamese woman and her name is Trinh. Trinh played with Jill that's what Jill remember.
Thanks for answering the questions but you still forgot the periods at the end of the sentences!!
As I have suggested with some other students, please use Read and Write Gold to listen to your answers to make sure they are clear and to monitor if you should add anything to your answers to make them clearer. For example, I am not sure what question 3 means but I think you have the word "fight" in there and I agree, Malala will probably continue to fight for what she believes in, when she returns to Pakistan.
Wed.Jan23.2013 1.What is your painting called/My painting is called Cartoon Land 2.How is your painting an example of your happiness/My painting is an example of happiness because it is a fun place to be 3.I`ll imagine that I`m in CartoonLand in a wide space
I like your painting. Why did you give it this particular title? What makes Cartoon Land a fun place to be? Are there certain things which happen there that are a lot of fun for you?
I thought you were going to comment on the beautiful mountains and sunlight. Either way, looking at your painting makes me feel relaxed and happy.
Remember to use periods at the end of your sentences, Sandro.
Thanks for your response, Sandro. I hope he has learned from his mistakes and I am sure he is not feeling the most positive right now.
I would like to see you follow the format of the Reading Response to make sure you are answering the full questions from the sections on how you RELATE and how you REFLECT on the article. Please complete this response and publish it again and I will read it. We will be doing another Reading Response very soon.
I think the "How can Usain Bolt run relly fast?" question is a Level 2 question. Be sure to use the chart to guide your questions.
As I said, you may have to do some reading about him to learn stuff about him. This should give you enough information to figure out how to answer your questions.
I like your #4 question. You seem to be understanding how to use the chart to ask and come up with your answers. Go through all of your questions and answers to see if you have answered all of them.
I will be introducing you to the animation portion of the assignment very soon. Good, persistent, work, Sandro.
Good work. Check your Level 3 question. Look at the structure because it appears to be a Level 2 question. A "how can" question is a Level 2.
This will be my last reminder before you begin to work on your script. Please look at the questioning rubric: http://amgfun.blogspot.ca/2013/02/wednesday-february-13-2013.html
It is important to complete the reading response on the same day because I don't think the old issues are available.
Make it a priority to complete this before the end of the day. There should be enough time in Library class or during Band time to complete this exercise.
Look To The Light/Janet Lormer
ReplyDeleteJill's cosin died and her name is Aggie. Aggie worked in New York and she was sponsering a vietnamese woman and her name is Trinh. Trinh played with Jill that's what Jill remember.
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ReplyDelete1.Malala is coming out of a hospital
This is a good start but I need to see you using a period in your sentence.
ReplyDelete2. Malala was shot head and neck
ReplyDelete3. I think she will figth to free her self danger
ReplyDeleteThanks for answering the questions but you still forgot the periods at the end of the sentences!!
ReplyDeleteAs I have suggested with some other students, please use Read and Write Gold to listen to your answers to make sure they are clear and to monitor if you should add anything to your answers to make them clearer.
For example, I am not sure what question 3 means but I think you have the word "fight" in there and I agree, Malala will probably continue to fight for what she believes in, when she returns to Pakistan.
Wed.Jan23.2013
ReplyDelete1.What is your painting called/My painting is called Cartoon Land
2.How is your painting an example of your happiness/My painting is an example of happiness because it is a fun place to be
3.I`ll imagine that I`m in CartoonLand in a wide space
I like your painting. Why did you give it this particular title?
ReplyDeleteWhat makes Cartoon Land a fun place to be? Are there certain things which happen there that are a lot of fun for you?
I thought you were going to comment on the beautiful mountains and sunlight. Either way, looking at your painting makes me feel relaxed and happy.
Remember to use periods at the end of your sentences, Sandro.
Fri.Feb 1.2013\
ReplyDeleteChris Spence is a good guy but he plagiarised most of his work and got credit for his work and he probably learned from his mistakes.
Thanks for your response, Sandro.
ReplyDeleteI hope he has learned from his mistakes and I am sure he is not feeling the most positive right now.
I would like to see you follow the format of the Reading Response to make sure you are answering the full questions from the sections on how you RELATE and how you REFLECT on the article. Please complete this response and publish it again and I will read it. We will be doing another Reading Response very soon.
1.Who is Usain Bolt?
ReplyDeleteUsain Bolt is a athlete.
2.Who would be able to beat Usain Bolt?
Yohan Blake beat Usain Bolt in 100m race.
Your questions sound a lot like the questions I created for this assignment. Please make sure you make your own for Level 3 + Level 4.
ReplyDelete3.How can Usain Bolt run relly fast?
ReplyDeleteUsain Bolt can run relly fast because he trains alot.
I think the "How can Usain Bolt run relly fast?" question is a Level 2 question. Be sure to use the chart to guide your questions.
ReplyDeleteAs I said, you may have to do some reading about him to learn stuff about him. This should give you enough information to figure out how to answer your questions.
4.How would Usain Bolt help his team in the 2016 sunmmer olympics?
ReplyDeleteUsain Bolt would tell his team to work harder and practice when they can to success in the next 2016 Summer Olympics.
I like your #4 question. You seem to be understanding how to use the chart to ask and come up with your answers.
ReplyDeleteGo through all of your questions and answers to see if you have answered all of them.
I will be introducing you to the animation portion of the assignment very soon.
Good, persistent, work, Sandro.
Level 1 Question:1.Who is Usain Bolt?
ReplyDeleteLevel 1 Answer:Usain Bolt is a athlete.
Level 2 Question:3.How can Usain Bolt run relly fast?
Level 2 Answer:Yohan Blake beat Usain Bolt in 100m race.
Level 3 Question:3.How can Usain Bolt run relly fast?
Level 3 Answer:Usain Bolt can run relly fast because he trains alot.
Level 4 Question:4.How would Usain Bolt help his team in the 2016 sunmmer olympics?
Level 4 Answer:Usain Bolt would tell his team to work harder and practice when they can to success in the next 2016 Summer Olympics.
Good work. Check your Level 3 question. Look at the structure because it appears to be a Level 2 question. A "how can" question is a Level 2.
ReplyDeleteThis will be my last reminder before you begin to work on your script. Please look at the questioning rubric: http://amgfun.blogspot.ca/2013/02/wednesday-february-13-2013.html
-This is about Jason Collins
ReplyDeleteYikes. You have only started this.
ReplyDeleteIt is important to complete the reading response on the same day because I don't think the old issues are available.
Make it a priority to complete this before the end of the day. There should be enough time in Library class or during Band time to complete this exercise.